So, in His infinite wisdom, He walled it away....for humankind would never set foot in His garden again.
And as He turned away...darkness decended upon the Garden of Eden.
The Angels wept, as they heard His soft sigh of disappointment echoing throught the Heavens.
God saw what had occurred, and looked closer upon these two beings that came from His despair... and knew He could not abandon them.
Though Adam and Eve were made in His image, these two were forged from the weeping of Angels.
Together they gazed upon all that God had created, in silent awe of His Magnificence. Soon they grew tired and fell asleep, dreaming of all they had seen.
God spoke to them in those dreams, calling them Lilith and Micha-El. He shared with them His hopes for them, and instilled within them their duty to fulfill those hopes as the Keepers of the Garden.
Lilith and Micha-El learned to nurture the land, as it nurtured them. And as time passed, they learned to care for themselves, and each other.They danced together under the pale moonlight......
but were left with the feeling that something was missing.
Lilith had decided to explore the Garden when she stumbled upon the Tree of Knowledge.
Remembering all that she had been taught, she carefully tended the tree, and harvested it's fruit.
When she finished, she returned to the Tree to make sure she had gotten all the fruit.
Suddenly, she sensed that she was not alone.
The snake had a voice as smoothe as velvet, and he spun for Lilith a temptation as sweet as the fruit she had just hidden.
But she remained unmoved. The snake was surprised at this...so he made a second tree appear.
Lilith called for Micha-El to join her......
and together they harvested the fruit to be hidden.
Being forged from the weeping of Angels, had made them impervious to Satan's insidious tongue.
They turned their backs upon the snake, and walked away without looking back, secure in their faith , and trust in God.
They remain the Keepers of the Garden of Eden.
Authors note: Please keep in mind that this waas my first foray into the world of Sims2 story telling. With pictures and all that. So please be kind.
And remember...this is only what could have been.
Thanks to all those wonderful Custom Content creators, if they hadn't, then I couldn't have......
20 comments:
very good i clap my 2 fingers (yes my fingures) in interest can't wait until the next part
You will have to wait then...at least until tomorrow....
But Thanks. I actually enjoy a 2 finger salute!!!
It's wonderful.
I'm at a loss for words...
Thanks Leah.....
Hopefully I will get some more up today.....
:D :D love it...The pictures where very dark.. lol but again, there is no need for pictures in your writing:D
:D i think a second part is coming right? lol
:D im going to add you to my writers list... ok?
That's fine. Go right ahead.
The darkness is because it is the Garden of Eden. No electricity. ;P
And yes...there is more coming....just be patient....
Ah I think I read the second part before this one. This was an interesting take on the creation myth. I really like where you went with this and am looking forward to more whenever you get it up.
Aislinn:
It's okay reading it backwards...I did that to one of yours...so we're even...:P
And thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this. It was my very first attenpt at a sim illustrated story.
and I think maybe I wrote it for children. But adults are liking it too!!!!
Gorgeous, evocative. I loved it the first time I read it, and now that I know a little more, I love it even more.
Thanks Beth. I hope you get much enjoyment from my stories....
I didn't realize how good people thought they were....
I loved reading this again. So beautiful. I am going to go enjoy the rest right now. Thanks for posting these here.
You're welcome Gayle! Thanks for checking them out again!!!!!
I've just discovered this story, but all I can say is that I am at a loss for words. It's so beautiful. I'm going to read the rest right now.
Thanks Lorianne! I am glad you are enjoying this story.
I hope you enjoy the others too!
Don't forget to check out some of my poetry and non pictured writings too...LOL!!
(Shameless plug) Heh heh heh!!!!
Very charming. I hope there will be more. I just love fairies. Beautiful scenery - I can tell you put a lot of work into your settings.
Thank you!!
If you only knew the story behind this one...and all the troubles I have gone too to get this one going....Unfortunately...my graphics card and my pc can't keep up.
Time will tell. I am thinking about re-doing it with all new pics and maybe changing it a little so I can continue it onwards.
That will take a new pc...Tax time I hope!!!
It's beautiful...Lovely, peaceful, and sad all at the same time! Your decoration must have taken you a quite a while, but it was worth your hard work, it looks wonderful! :)
Thank you Zayuri!!
I am glad you enjoyed it! This was my first simstory ever. And yes, it was a lot of work...but it has paid off in the end..so many have enjoyed it!!!
I like your story, too, Melissa! I love fairy stories! I would have liked to see a close up of Lilith and Micha-el's faces. I love seeing the character's expressions and what they look like. :)
If you decide to do a re-do that would be great!
Well, I'm going to snoop through more of your stuff now... so stay tuned! :)
Thanks Tammy!!!
There are 3 more parts to this...don't forget to check them out too!!!
Glad you are enjoying this!!!
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